Field story 001 · public English edition

When the Waterline
Rose.

A storm is coming. Four surveyors are already underground.

Your part in the storyHelp Mara get the team back into daylight before the rain reaches the ridge.

Read the scene. Choose Mara’s next line. See what follows.

For families and readers age 9+

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8:40 AM · White Ridge trailheadStation 01

The storm is still over the next hill.

Four cave surveyors check weather, lights, and a field map before entering a cave — The entrance is dry. The forecast is not.

Mara folds the weather printout into the map case. Above the cave, the sky is bright. Beyond the next ridge, a rain band is moving toward them.

The four-person survey team has one job: map the unfinished side passage and be back at the trailhead by 12:30.

Mara uncaps her pencil. There is room for one last line at the top of the page.

The team is waiting

“What do I write?” she asks.